So first of all, in general a pretty good job. The tone of your language, your bodylanguage, and the speed you talk at are really good and there is not much point of improvement. The idea itself sounds nice, but the logistics are really difficult because you would have to find doctors who are willing to move, which is almost impossible. Moreover, the sport trousers do not really seem very professional and you should definitely tuck your shirt. Otherwise, nice job.
Greetings Brandon, Overall great job on your pitch. The body language was great, especially with the use of your hands. I will say that the lightning is not playing to your favor though, it creates a bad shadow over you. I also thing that it would be better if you worked on trying to example everything a little more. Go into some details, I think it will help sell it.
Hey Brandon,
ReplyDeleteSo first of all, in general a pretty good job. The tone of your language, your bodylanguage, and the speed you talk at are really good and there is not much point of improvement. The idea itself sounds nice, but the logistics are really difficult because you would have to find doctors who are willing to move, which is almost impossible. Moreover, the sport trousers do not really seem very professional and you should definitely tuck your shirt. Otherwise, nice job.
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Greetings Brandon,
ReplyDeleteOverall great job on your pitch. The body language was great, especially with the use of your hands. I will say that the lightning is not playing to your favor though, it creates a bad shadow over you. I also thing that it would be better if you worked on trying to example everything a little more. Go into some details, I think it will help sell it.