Pitching Practice Makes Perfect
The feedback that stood out the most was that I needed to explain my idea more. As well as me providing more information and being more lively and not robotic.
I changed the pitch and decided to explain the idea more than provide a pitch so that is different. I can definitely say that I am more comfortable in front of the camera.
Hi Brandon. I think you effectively explained the unique value that your optical business has for customers. I agree that the centralized location is a key component of your business. Your hand gestures were a good complement to the directional information you gave and helped to keep the audience’s focus by emphasizing certain points. One recommendation I have is to not say “uh” so much since it diminishes the audience connection you created in your introduction.
ReplyDeleteHey Brandon,
ReplyDeleteI think that it is great that you included the background story for what gave you the idea. I think it gives it a personal touch. I do agree that say "um" less would be really effective for the pitch. I would suggest writing some sort of script or speech. I know that for me that has been really helpful for doing my pitches.
Shalom Brandon, you did a phenomenal job with this elevator pitch and I really enjoyed watching it. I notice your reppin the gators too! I think this pitch went well in general but it was definitely a little choppy and had some filler words. That is something that I struggle with when I am trying to come up with something on the spot. I really appreciate the college vibe of the video though man.
ReplyDelete